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	<description>My new sci-fi thriller, TimeSplash, available now!</description>
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		<title>By: Eleanor Van Natta</title>
		<link>http://grahamstorrs.cantalibre.com/20/01/2010/a-writing-tip/comment-page-1/#comment-1372</link>
		<dc:creator>Eleanor Van Natta</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 25 Jan 2010 23:54:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ah, yes, transformation, horses as avatars, love and loss and found, drugs and the healthcare system - how can it NOT be a best-seller? :) Thanks for your support!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ah, yes, transformation, horses as avatars, love and loss and found, drugs and the healthcare system &#8211; how can it NOT be a best-seller? <img src='http://grahamstorrs.cantalibre.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  Thanks for your support!</p>
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		<title>By: Graham Storrs</title>
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		<dc:creator>Graham Storrs</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 25 Jan 2010 11:17:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Eleanor. (Yes, Joanna&#039;s great isn&#039;t she?) I was just looking at your site and I&#039;m pretty sure you&#039;re onto a winner with your book. Transformation AND horses! I can think of half-a-dozen women who would gobble it up. I hope they&#039;ll be queueing out the door when &#039;Becoming Sage&#039; is released.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Eleanor. (Yes, Joanna&#8217;s great isn&#8217;t she?) I was just looking at your site and I&#8217;m pretty sure you&#8217;re onto a winner with your book. Transformation AND horses! I can think of half-a-dozen women who would gobble it up. I hope they&#8217;ll be queueing out the door when &#8216;Becoming Sage&#8217; is released.</p>
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		<title>By: Eleanor Van Natta</title>
		<link>http://grahamstorrs.cantalibre.com/20/01/2010/a-writing-tip/comment-page-1/#comment-1365</link>
		<dc:creator>Eleanor Van Natta</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 24 Jan 2010 16:09:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I am laughing because I did NOT expect this for a writing tip; excellent advice, since I have very high expectations of the books that I buy (&amp; a short  attention span...and small children running around my house). I have been known to frequently put a book down and read no further after the first chapter - if I even get that far. So thank you - I will definitely keep your advice in mind as I forge ahead with my own writing. Looking forward to reading your book! (Thanks as always to Joanna Penn for sending out this link.)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am laughing because I did NOT expect this for a writing tip; excellent advice, since I have very high expectations of the books that I buy (&amp; a short  attention span&#8230;and small children running around my house). I have been known to frequently put a book down and read no further after the first chapter &#8211; if I even get that far. So thank you &#8211; I will definitely keep your advice in mind as I forge ahead with my own writing. Looking forward to reading your book! (Thanks as always to Joanna Penn for sending out this link.)</p>
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		<title>By: Graham Storrs</title>
		<link>http://grahamstorrs.cantalibre.com/20/01/2010/a-writing-tip/comment-page-1/#comment-1362</link>
		<dc:creator>Graham Storrs</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 24 Jan 2010 03:30:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh, it&#039;s definitely true, J-A. I just hadn&#039;t realised it was a matter of life and death before!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh, it&#8217;s definitely true, J-A. I just hadn&#8217;t realised it was a matter of life and death before!</p>
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		<title>By: j-a brock</title>
		<link>http://grahamstorrs.cantalibre.com/20/01/2010/a-writing-tip/comment-page-1/#comment-1355</link>
		<dc:creator>j-a brock</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 23 Jan 2010 07:34:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>based on my revising experience - i hear ya!  and the beauty is that the more interesting you make it for yourself, the more interesting it is for the reader too, so it&#039;s all good.  or at least that&#039;s what i tell myself.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>based on my revising experience &#8211; i hear ya!  and the beauty is that the more interesting you make it for yourself, the more interesting it is for the reader too, so it&#8217;s all good.  or at least that&#8217;s what i tell myself.</p>
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		<title>By: Graham Storrs</title>
		<link>http://grahamstorrs.cantalibre.com/20/01/2010/a-writing-tip/comment-page-1/#comment-1342</link>
		<dc:creator>Graham Storrs</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 11:30:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Merrilee and Joanna.

Terry, it is a good thing. It is a good thing. It is a good thing...

Sheila, don&#039;t tell anyone but there was a section in TimeSplash that the editor annotated with &quot;Too boring to review now. I&#039;ll look at it again tomorrow.&quot; Once I&#039;d climbed down off the ledge, I decided she was right. It got a re-write!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Merrilee and Joanna.</p>
<p>Terry, it is a good thing. It is a good thing. It is a good thing&#8230;</p>
<p>Sheila, don&#8217;t tell anyone but there was a section in TimeSplash that the editor annotated with &#8220;Too boring to review now. I&#8217;ll look at it again tomorrow.&#8221; Once I&#8217;d climbed down off the ledge, I decided she was right. It got a re-write!</p>
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		<title>By: Sheila (@stinginthetail)</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sheila (@stinginthetail)</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 11:19:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>*waves pompoms* i realised a part of my (as yet unfinished) book was complete twaddle when during an edit i got bored reading it :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>*waves pompoms* i realised a part of my (as yet unfinished) book was complete twaddle when during an edit i got bored reading it <img src='http://grahamstorrs.cantalibre.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: terry</title>
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		<dc:creator>terry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 09:39:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>And this is a good thing....? Ah, well, roll on success.
terry</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>And this is a good thing&#8230;.? Ah, well, roll on success.<br />
terry</p>
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		<title>By: Joanna Penn</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joanna Penn</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 06:06:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Graham, you are so right! When you have read your book so many times, I think it is ok to be over it! 
Looking forward to your launch! 

Joanna</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Graham, you are so right! When you have read your book so many times, I think it is ok to be over it!<br />
Looking forward to your launch! </p>
<p>Joanna</p>
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		<title>By: Merrilee</title>
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		<dc:creator>Merrilee</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 02:44:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Lol, very good advice!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lol, very good advice!</p>
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