One in Seven

A new kind of contest
Continuing yesterday’s competitions theme, I see the Editor Unleased/Smashwords Flash Fiction 40 competition has announced the 40 lucky winners. (That’s me, about half-way down the list, under the user ID graywave.) As there are 40 winners and there were only 280 entrants, that puts me roughly in the top 20%.
I remember a day, many, many years ago, when a friend of mine said – a propos of nothing in particular – “You’re a leader of men. You’re one in twenty.” His sincere tone and generally admiring manner suggested he really meant it as a compliment. I’ve often wondered what prompted it and I’ve often wished I’d quizzed him about it instead of just staring at him, gobsmacked. Yet I have often noticed that, in various areas of life, I am, actually, one in twenty – somewhere in that top 5% anyway. Of course, it depends on how well you choose your comparison group. With care, you can be one in a hundred or better.
Flash Fiction 40 was a bit of fun – and a marketing ploy, of course. That’s why there were so many winners. It was also a very unusual contest in that there were two kinds of judging. First off, all the entries were on display at the Editor Unleashed Forum and readers were asked to read as many as possible and to give each one a score out of 5 (5 good, 1 bad). Then a bunch of ‘editors’ read through all of the stories and made an independent assessment of them, coming up with the top 40 and an overall winner. So it was partly like a normal contest and partly a beauty contest.
Frankly, it is the beauty contest side of this that was most interesting for me. It often occurs to me to worry that I don’t write in a popular-enough style. When you don’t have a book on the shelves and have no sales figures to look at, all you have to go on is what editors and agents think. Here was a chance to see just how well-received my work would be because the average ratings for all 280 stories are on display. At first glance, this tells you almost nothing, since the numbers are rounded to the nearest whole number and presented as stars. As anyone who has ever done social science research would expect, 3 stars was the score almost everybody got. Slightly more interesting was the fact that there were no four-star and no five-star ratings (plenty of 2s and a few 1s). But, if you look beneath the stars at the actual scores, it is even more interesting. Almost nobody scored as high as 3. There were literally half a dozen or so scores of 3.00 and above. The overall winner had a score of 3.50.
Most inetersting to me was that my own score was 3.22* putting me in the top handful of stories by reader’s score, certainly well within that magical 5% group. So, what can I conclude from all this:
- Readers, at least those who visited this site, who were probably also writers, like my stuff.
- People vary widely in their tastes. I can tell this because this was a very varied bunch of stories and there were no stand-out winners. The ratings clustered around the mean.
- People didn’t really like any of these stories much. The top few percent managed to scrape an average just above 3. The great majority were in the 2-3 range. I suspect that if Anton Checkhov and O. Henry had entered pieces of flash fiction, they wouldn’t have made it to 4. (It would have been easy to ‘game’ the contest by giving a low rating to anything that looked better than your own piece. This kind of behaviour would certainly explain the strange shift to low scores. Are writers really so devious?)
- There are some good flash fiction writers out there. I read dozens of these stories and found some real gems.
- People can be very nice. Several people – all of them strangers – took the trouble to write to me to say how much they had enjoyed my story. Some were extremely flattering. It’s just what a writer needs, sometimes.
- 204 people read one of my stories who would not otherwise have done so (well, 202, really). That alone has to have been worth the trouble of putting it in an email and sending it in.
Fascinating. This particular ‘win’ won’t go in my cv, but it has definitely been an interesting event to participate in.
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*Look, I could work out the variances and give those, too, I know averages without variances don’t mean too much, but life is just too short. Besides, there were all kinds of biases. For instance, writers were encouraged to recuit all their friends and family to go along and rate their stories – including all their Facebook ‘friends’. This is fair enough, since it is, after all, a popularity contest and, as I said, a marketing ploy. But this did make some of the figures a bit suspect. Most pieces had between 150 and 200 readers, I’d say (mine had 204 – but I swear I only mentioned I’d entered to two people) but a few had over 500 readers – including the winner.
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I can see your a numbers man. But could I suggest an alternative viewpoint eschewing the tedious humdrum of averages (not that i have anything against numbers, I teach mathematics with a passion).
The alternative viewpoint consists of stepping back and just looking at the landscape. What have you gained/experienced by entering this competition? Some pluses, some very good pluses as outlined in your post. The negative may be a niggling concern over the muneriacl rating.
But (get to the point, please!!);
1. You have written a piece
2. You have written with an audience in mind
3. You have submitted that piece for critical appreciation (brr,, getting cold in here)
4. A lot of people, complete strangers to you, read the piece and liked it.
5. Many people took the trouble to communicate their feelings to you.
This is not just a small competition, I suggest it is quite a landmark in any writer’s career. Your career.
Wish I’d done the same.
Ah you may wish you’d entered but be careful what you wish for. I’ve read on two other writers’ blogs that they entered and were not in the top 40 and are feeling quite devastated about it. Not only did they fail to make the cut, not only did their peers fail to recognise the quality of their writing (and one of them, I know, is a good writer), but their failure was a highly-visible, public humiliation (in their eyes). I think I might have felt the same had I not made the cut – or, more likely, I’d have found some excellent reason why the whole exercise was completely invalid and bogus
It turns out that the winning 40 stories will be “published” by Smashwords and available for free from their website. Maybe I will put it on my cv after all.
I think I might be one of the writers you mention, as I certainly blogged about being gutted! I’m still glad I entered, as I think all of this is grist for the mill. I know several people went out into their social networks to encourage people to come and vote for them, whereas I deliberately didn’t – I wanted to see where it got on its own. Less than 60 people read it according to the stats when the votes closed. I wish I could do it over but driving people from outside the forum in to support me, but alas, real life isn’t like a psychology experiment…
I got some lovely private messages from people who loved the story, and I enjoyed writing it. It was useful to see what other stuff came in – I loved your story Graham and I feel your win was well deserved. I thought some were awful. I thought many were boring – so few really grabbed me. So from that point of view, it was really interesting.
So on balance, I’m glad I entered, I just wish I’d done better!